so I added more detail to it, but im still not sure if its what I need to make good conversions. I looked online a bit for other reviews on these and most of them seem to just break down the sales page of the actual vendor and just point out high keypoints in a shorter description. Here it is though, quick question though , is it to long ? It seems kinda long a short story to me.
THE SIMPLE GOLF SWING REVIEW
Ok I’m going to start off by saying this system is not going to turn you pro, this golf swing system was specifically designed to help your golf swing,
[full stop] trust me I’ve spent hours reviewing this system top to bottom. If you commit to it and actually put what you learn into effect it’s going to help you hit the ball straight, farther
[further] and more accurate on a consistent basis.
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It
[instead of "it" maybe we can put "The Simple Gold Swing" so that we get our keywords in here as much as possible for SEO purposes] was designed by David Nevogt who is a substantially great golf trainer, and who spent several years getting this system built to help golfers out there like you and me. It’s
[can we put our keyword here again instead of "It's"] been around since about 2002 which has given me quite a bit of information on it and time to research it and make sure it wasn’t just one of the regular scams out there on the net.
[I was a little skeptical at first when I first pulled up the sales page, because it sounded to good to be true (sounds a bit salesy?)]. Which is why I dedicated time to looking on the inside of this system to make sure people out there weren’t just waisting
[wasting (use spellcheck)] there time and money,
[full stop] I mean come on 7-12 strokes in 2 weeks
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Please !
Everyone out there knows that golf is one of the hardest sports to master. It takes patience, strength and physical ability. So I personally looked into it deeper. So what I did is buy the book
[use "get the system" instead of "buy the book" - try to stay away from any words that might subconciously suggest to people that you're selling to them] and actually try the system out. It was a pretty impressive e-book, there’s a lot of information to obtain though. Once I started reading it, I discovered, this guy really knows what he’s talking about. He didn’t just put this out there to try and make a quick buck, he actually dedicated a lot of time into it to help people like you and me. It has really helped me out quite a bit , I read the book
[instead of "book" substitute the word "system" - people respond better to it] probably 5-6 times and then took it with me out on the green one morning to make
[sure that] I hadn’t forgot anything,
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after the long day of golf I discovered I’ve dropped my score about 4-5 strokes, (not 7-12 but still a great improvement) especially considering I lowered my handicap from a 17 to a 13.. Not only that but I was hitting the ball with greater distance and straighter then ever before. The only thing though is I don’t have a lot of time for golf, so it all took me about a month to achieve this. If you are a more consistent player I’m sure you’ll be able to do it faster. I am certainly happy with my progress I’ve made though and that’s why I’ve dedicated more time into referring this to people who are need of the help that I was able to achieve.
The only thing I personally didn't like was that it is in a book format. I honestly would have preferred an actual video, just because I find them easier to follow. (Which there is one called Pure Point Golf) You can see the review on that as well. I’m one of those look at pretty pictures and watch video learners though.
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Don’t get me wrong I mean it does walk you step by step and basically take you by the hand to help perfect your golf swing to hit on a more consistent basis. I’m just personally not much of a reader so I prefer a video. You may be different though, I know for instance my mom would rather read then watch a DVD. She’s a little old fashioned though, (that’s between us ok?) Although I mean "heck" its insanely popular though, its helped thousands of people in 36 country’s on each of the 7 continents fix there golf swing problems, and I found that’s its also ranked the #1 golf swing training systems on the net. So apparently people out there are definitely more into reading then watching videos. I guess if you’re really in need for help then it doesn’t really matter how the training system is made, as long as it works right?
To be perfectly frank,
[<---You can take that out if you like] I do highly recommend this book
[insread of "this book" use your keywords "the Simple Golf System"] if you are having problems with your golf swing, because it is a proven system that will help your golf swing significantly. It’s going to help you get a more profound groove for a consistent swing. You do need to know though you actually do need to make sure you take full advantage of the information in this book. If you plan to just browse through it and not put the information this book teaches you then it’s not going to help you. You might as well take the easy lazy way out and waist
[waste] 200+ dollars a personal golf trainer.
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If you don't plan to really use this system and are not serious about helping your golf swing then don't even waist
[there goes that body part again] your money on it.
This is the real deal, its no hoax. (trying to hard) This system does work for people who are serious about improving there golf swing. It helped me tremendously!
If you are serious then I highly suggest buying the book
[replace "buying this book" with "getting this system"], because you will lower your handicap and be breaking 80 in no time at all. Plus it comes with a money back guarantee which I know from first hand experience is fully legit. They are very fast and efficient with refunds. So you yourself find the book sucks then just get a refund and take of advantage of the free information. One other thing I discovered is that you also get 8 other golf bonus books with the simple golf swing system. Very much worth a try if you ask me.