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Originally Posted by burton4550

Hey there just wanted to keep everyone posted who is following or reading this thread.. I finally started writing the content for my website. I've got the welcome page written and I also wrote one review so far on the The Simple Golf Swing clickbank vendor. (who has the highest grav) Here it is, tell me what you think and if Im writing the right stuff or if I need to optimize it a little better. I plan to rank it with the stars and also put some pictures up along with it ... I will do this with all 4 of the vendors I will be promoting, I also will be putting up articles within my website to add a little extra to it.

The Simple Golf Swing E-book

What To Expect

Are you tired of searching the internet looking for the easy way out on how to improve your golf swing? Looking for something that can rapidly increase your golf skills. Well the Simple Golf Swing written by David Nevogt is what you have been searching for. I have already put in numerous hours doing all the work for you, to make sure you get your moneys worth. Look at it this way, you may have found this site because you are confused and not knowing what is really gonna work and what is just a scam. The simple golf swing e-book is your way out. It will help almost any golfer break 80. It's the real deal and you definitely get what you pay for, which is a more improved consistant golf game. Why spend $80 plus for lessons when you can learn everything for almost half that price?

What it Teaches

Ill start by saying you won't turn top pro once you read this the e-book, but you will dramatically improve your golf swing mechanics, and play better golf! It will take you pretty much by the hand and show you exactly how to develop a better swing that will have you consistently playing better. It's basically like having your own golf swing trainer. Except without the expensive cost! You will hit with greater distance, hit the ball more accurately and further then you have ever hit before and you'll land on the green more and get closer to the pin without luck, all with skill ! Sound good ? Well there's more to it as well. The book is packed full ! Which means within 2 weeks or less your game is gonna be on all the time. You will have your friends wondering how and why. No more people laughing at you out there! All you will be hearing is the smooth straight accurate slice between you and the hole.

The guarantee

If all there was with this system was just a marking or picture that said gaurantee it would make you a little suspiscous right ? Well this system has had more then 19,000 golfers in 36 countries that swear this system has helped increase golf drive,correct golf swing and even lower your golf handicap. Don't take my word for it, I've actually got testimonials from actual people who have tried out the Simple Golf Swing e-book . Best of all if you are not satisfied there is a 60 money back refund. So what have you got to lose? Absolutely nothing at all except saving a couple hundred dollars from lessons. You can download it now instantly and soak in all the information in one day! Before you know it you will be out there showing all your friends up!

There's some good points about this review but I think you need to realize that people are skeptical for a reason. They do not want to get sold to. Now if you were to talk to them as a friend rather than a salesman, then it doesn't matter that the vendor is selling to them. They want to be put at ease.

This is why affiliate marketing is so important. In most cases a presell will convert a skeptical browser into a paying customer. A good presell gets the customer to drop his guard and if you're presenting value then its a win win situation for all involved.

What I'm really trying to say is, you're review while it does have its good points (19000 golfers in 36 countries), is a bit on the selling side, rather than preselling. Therefore, it's a situation where the potential customer is being oversold to. He's getting a sales message from the affiliate and then another one from the vendor. This won't convert as well as if you were to do the following.

How do you presell something?

What does the potential buyer want? He wants a review on this ebook.

If he's searching for a review of the product by name, then chances are he has already found the vendor. He just wants to know if anyone else thinks its a good buy.

Ever went to a movie and you're friend asks you "hey man how as that movie? Is it any good?"

What do you tell them? More than likely you don't really care whether or not they decide to see it. You're going to tell them as it is how YOU feel about the movie. After all you're not getting paid to tell people its good right?

Well this is why you should always recommend good products. So you can tell people that its good with a clear conscience. This will also help you write better reviews.

The main points of writing a review presell:

State opinions, not facts. How do you feel about the product? Do you think it can help the consumer? NOT how many pages in the ebook and who the writer is. Of course, you can mention these things but focus mainly on the opinions. This is what the consumer is seeking.

Don't be one sided. Nothing is perfect. State also what you didn't like about the product. You'll get more people to feel at ease and therefore more conversions.

Know your product. I realize you cant possibly buy ever ebook out there but if its possible buy the one that you rank #1. See it as a business expense. You'll be able to write more compelling and higher converting reviews and you'll be able to make back your money easily with a few sales. If its a Clickbank product buy it through your own link to get a discount.

If its not possible to buy the product a simple way to get to know the product is to do a google search for reviews on the product. One of the best places to look for reviews are forums. You will usually find unbiased reviews from forum communities that have reviewed the products you're writing about.

Once again, I would say that you're doing a great job and following the process. Make some adjustments to your review, make it more user friendly and you'll definitely be onto something.

Jay